【写作任务】(改编自2017 湖南益阳书面表达)
暑假即将来临，许多学生喜欢下河游泳。为预防游泳溺水事故的发生，你们班将举行以“珍爱生命，预防溺水”为主题的班会。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对安全游泳的建议，建议内容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允许擅自结伴游泳；不会游泳，不要下水救人……
要求：1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
2. 内容可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
4. 词数：70词左右。
参考词汇：alone without permission (未经许可) allow
ask for help cherish (珍爱)
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：应用文(发言稿)；发言稿的主体部分为说明文
时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：第一人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
(1)衔接几条建议时，可以使用表示列举顺序的词firstly，secondly和lastly。
(2)在连句成篇时，前后句之间为顺承关系，可以用and来连接。
(3)在连句成篇时，前后句之间为因果关系，可以用so来连接。
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4. 添佳句
Safety always comes first. (安全永远是第一位的。)
5. 成篇章
Hello, everyone! _____________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you.
答案
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) But how can we swim safely
(2) We shouldn't swim in strange rivers or lakes
(3) We shouldn't swim with our friends without permission
(4) We should shout as loud / loudly as possible to ask for help
(5) Let's cherish life
5. 成篇章
Hello, everyone! Summer vacation is coming. Some of us like going swimming in rivers and lakes. But how can we swim safely? Here is my advice.
Firstly, we shouldn't swim in strange rivers or lakes. And we shouldn't go swimming alone. Secondly, we shouldn't swim with our friends without permission. And we are not allowed to swim without a parent. Lastly, if we can't swim, we shouldn't jump into the water to save a person. We should shout as loudly as possible to ask for help.
Safety always comes first. We live only once, so let's cherish life.
That's all. Thank you.
