【写作任务】(改编自2017 江苏苏州书面表达)
假定你是苏华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(电子邮件);电子邮件的主体部分为说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
(1)在连句成篇时,前后句之间为因果关系,可以用because或so来连接。
(2)在补充说明原因时,可以使用besides或what's more来表达语义的引申。
(3)在连句成篇时,前后句句意转折,可以使用however来连接。
(4)总结时,可以使用all in all或in short,这样对整个上文能起到归纳和概括的作用。
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4. 成篇章
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your e-mail. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.
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How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
答案
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) I've made quite a few friends by joining the club
(2) It's an excellent chance to learn team spirit
(3) The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies
(4) She is the person who / that has helped me most in junior high
(5) It's colorful and meaningful
4. 成篇章
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your e-mail. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.
I like the Football Club best because I've made quite a few friends by joining it. Besides, it's an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
However, I've also met some problems over the past three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies.
Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in junior high.
All in all, I enjoy my school life because it's colorful and meaningful.
How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Su Hua