【写作任务】(改编自2017 甘肃白银书面表达)
今天是西方的“父亲节”，请根据图片的提示以My Best Dad为题写一篇短文介绍自己的父亲。
要求：
1. 文中需包含提示中提到的至少4条内容；
2. 可根据图片发挥想象、适量拓展；
3. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数：80-100词左右；
5. 文中不得出现父亲的真实姓名、工作单位及考生的任何个人相关信息。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：记叙文 时态：一般现在时 人称：以第三人称为主
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
本文中体现了语义搭配这一通过词汇纽带来使上下文紧密连贯的衔接方式。如本文中的 … years old, is so good at, likes to …, likes eating … best, my favorite memory of …, love, proud of这些表达都与描写人物相关联，从而使文章成为一个有机统一体。
4. 成篇章
My Best Dad
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答案：
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) My dad is so good at making my whole family happy
(2) he likes to tell / telling us something interesting (that) he's heard or read during the day
(3) My dad likes to eat / eating noodles best
(4) he always wants to keep / stop / prevent me from making mistakes but he will try to let me find my own way once I make a mistake
(5) I love him and I'm proud of / I take pride in him
4. 成篇章
My Best Dad
My dad is the best man I know. He is 45 years old. He is so good at making my whole family happy. When he comes home from work, he likes to tell us something interesting he's heard or read during the day. And his pockets are full of chocolates that always make me happy. He likes eating noodles best. My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he will try to let me find my own way once I make a mistake, even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt. This is my best dad. I love him and I'm proud of him.
